Audience feedback

 As we had a first rough cut of our video we decided to get some audience feedback from other members of the class and external students. This enabled us to take onboard comments so that we could improve the video. For us, the video makes sense, but to other people who don't know the concept behind it, they may not and so this feedback illustrates this for us. Whether they like it or not will also demonstrate to us whether it is reaching our target audience. 
The comments that we got for our video were hugely positive. It was good to get a mix of media students, who were more likely to see technical problems and non media students who watch it from an entertainment point of view. 

Comments/Feedback 
The comments that we had got given were as follows:

• a good variety of shots/angles
• great use of different locations
• Good performance
• Natural chemistry between actors
• Like the simplicity 

A comment was made on the consistent performance of the artist and the natural chemistry between the artist and the character. These were two aspects of the video that were very important to us when making and filming. This was because the editing and concept was simple so the performance and acting was to be of a good, high, solid standard.

Improvements that we can make

• To finish the video- this was something that we were obviously aware of as the montage at the end of the video had not been done at that moment in time.